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Priya Rajput 💌's avatar

Bryan, this hooked me from the very first paragraph. 😭❄️ The atmosphere is incredible, and Gateland already feels like one of those places I desperately want to keep exploring. That ending gave me chills.👏📚

Bryan Ritchey's avatar

Thank yooooou

River's avatar

I love how many puns are so well-played here. The setting, and somehow even the names, give this feeling of an endless “Christmas of old” and per usual, I am so invested.

River's avatar

I love how many puns are so well-played here. The setting, and somehow even the names, give this feeling of an endless “Christmas of old” and per usual, I am so invested.

Zephyr Mezmeron👾CYBEROCCULTISM's avatar

The setting is so enticingly unique and the dialogue here is noir at its best. Very nice, my friend. I look forward to part two!